Step 1: Explicit Teaching & Modelling
Define the outcome-specific metalanguage (language, sentence, image) and model how to identify the feature, select evidence and explain or use it.
Learning goals
1. Outcome Overview & Core Concepts
Students learn to create and edit literary texts that experiment with language features and literary devices encountered in texts. They identify precise evidence and explain or evaluate how a language, structural, literary or multimodal choice shapes meaning, representation, audience response or purpose. Key concepts include language, sentence, image, character, setting, literary.
Learning target: create and edit literary texts that experiment with language features and literary devices encountered in texts
4-Step Instructional Sequence
4. 4-Step Instructional Sequence
Step 2: Guided Analysis
Work through a second example together: What is the choice or feature? Where is the evidence? What does it do here?
Step 3: Collaborative / Independent Practice
Students annotate, compare, read, edit, speak or compose with a fresh example, then apply the concept independently.
Step 4: Formative Assessment
Use an unseen micro-text, oral task or creation task. Require precise evidence plus a justified explanation or deliberate crafting choice.
Subject-Specific Content & Key Examples
2. Subject-Specific Content & Key Examples
Structure follows purpose
A procedure uses ordered steps because sequence matters; a story may organise events to build tension; an information report groups related facts under headings.
Cohesion across sentences
Compare “Mia found a shell. Mia washed the shell.” with “Mia found a shell. She washed it.” The pronoun connects ideas without unnecessary repetition.
Paragraph focus
A paragraph is easier to follow when its sentences develop one main idea rather than jumping between unrelated points.
Transfer
Give a short mixed-up text. Students choose one structural or cohesive change, make it, and explain how it helps the reader.
Curriculum Coverage & Elaborations
Curriculum Coverage & Elaborations
The content description is the required target. The elaborations below are taught as examples and contexts, not as disconnected checklist wording.
- E1: using aspects of texts in imaginative recreations such as re-situating a character from a text into a new situation
- E2: creating a prequel using an imagined series of life events of a character presented as a series of flashbacks in a scripted monologue
- E3: creating chapters for an autobiography, short story or diary
- E4: experimenting with different narrative structures such as the epistolary form, flashback and multiple narrators
- E5: experimenting with imagery, sentence variation, metaphor and word choice when creating a literary text
- E6: transforming familiar print narratives into short video or film narratives, drawing on knowledge of the type of text and possible adaptations to setting for a new mode
Common Student Misconceptions
3. Common Student Misconceptions
- Feature spotting: Naming a camera angle, colour or sound is not analysis; explain its effect.
- One fixed effect: Interpret the feature in context and alongside other modes.
- Separate-mode lists: Explain how image, words and sound reinforce, contradict or qualify one another.
- Retelling: Analyse how the representation was constructed, not only what it shows.
Practice Thought & Formative Assessment
Practice Thought & Formative Assessment
Use a fresh example that has not been modelled. Ask the student to show the exact clue, feature or language choice and explain or use it independently.
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Curriculum equivalents: Victoria, NSW and international
Curriculum equivalents for And edit literary texts that experiment with language features and...
Mapped skill: create and edit literary texts that experiment with language features and literary devices encountered in texts
These references identify matching or closely related learning. Curriculum sequence, terminology and depth vary, so teachers should use the mapped skill and lesson difficulty to confirm suitability.
| Region | Curriculum framework | Closest level or code |
|---|---|---|
| Australia | Australian Curriculum v9.0 | AC9E7LE07 · Year 7 |
| Victoria | Victorian Curriculum F–10 Version 2.0 — English | VC2E7LE06 · Level 7 |
| New South Wales | NSW English K–10 Syllabus (2022) | EN4-ECB-01 + EN4-ECA-01 · Stage 4 |
| United States (USA) | Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts | Grade 7 |
| Canada (Ontario) | Ontario Curriculum — English | Grade 7 |
| United Kingdom (England) | National Curriculum in England — English | Year 8, Key Stage 3 |
| India | NCERT / CBSE — English | Class 7 |
Australian Curriculum v9.0 is the canonical source for this SkillrHub lesson. Victoria and NSW entries name the closest published state codes or outcomes; international entries are planning references rather than claims of identical curricula.
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