Important questions, practice and review
Question: Why can two readers agree that a story is boring without turning “boring” into an objective fact? Answer: agreement can be shared, but “boring” still describes a response to the story.
Question: How can you make a report more objective? Answer: remove personal evaluations while preserving the supplied people, events, counts, times and places. Do not replace missing facts with guesses.
Try independently: change “The delightful picnic lasted two hours beside the lake” into an objective report. Then explain the change. Model: “The picnic lasted two hours beside the lake.” Removing “delightful” removes evaluation; the duration and place remain.
Compare: “The gate is 1 metre wide” was later checked and measured at 1.2 metres. Was the first claim an opinion about a favourite width? Answer: no; it was an objectively worded but inaccurate measurement claim. Correct the number using the evidence.
Support, core and extend
Support: compare one count with one preference aloud and identify a single word clue. Core: annotate a mixed paragraph and write a report/opinion pair. Extend: explain how “only six” frames an unchanged count as fewer than expected; it does not prove a shared expectation.
Exit ticket
Read: “The club displayed eight models on Friday. I believe the colourful display was a wonderful achievement.” Copy the checkable count/day and a thinking phrase plus an evaluative word. Rewrite the second sentence to report only information supported by the passage.
Expected evidence: eight models, Friday; “I believe”; “wonderful”. A suitable revised report is “The club displayed eight models on Friday.” “Colourful” can describe appearance; it is not as clear an evaluative clue as “wonderful”. Adult check: require the actual words and an accurate report. If the student invents a prize or claims everyone admired it, return to the evidence and attribution model.