Examples and adult review guidance
Task 1
Example or expected evidence: The noun group a rain-soaked hat helps me picture a wet sailor arriving from outdoors. I like the smile because it makes the character seem friendly.
Adult check: Require a correctly identified noun group, image/effect and a personal opinion supported by the words. A different supported impression is acceptable.
Task 2
Example or expected evidence: A beehive suggests lots of busy activity. I like the comparison because it helps me imagine children preparing energetically.
Adult check: Require nonliteral busy activity, not literal bees. Accept noisy activity as a plausible association; distinguish an inference from a stated fact.
Task 3
Example or expected evidence: Once more emphasises repeated effort. I find the ending satisfying because the knot finally holds.
Adult check: Require repetition and its effect tied to continued effort and success; accept other text-supported opinions.
Task 4
Example or expected evidence: Last season returns to an earlier time. Her earlier shyness makes leading the team seem like a brave change, which I admire.
Adult check: Require earlier-time contrast, its effect and a supported opinion. Do not require claiming the team wins.
Task 5
Example or expected evidence: The unidentified footstep and stillness create uncertainty. Gran identifying herself explains the sound and can bring relief.
Adult check: Require both build-up evidence and resolution of the immediate uncertainty; accept different supported response.
Task 6
Example or expected evidence: I would choose tapped softly because it suggests gentle sound. Hammered feels forceful and less suited to peace.
Adult check: Require a choice plus comparison of wording and effect, not only naming a preferred sentence.
Task 7
Example or expected evidence: I think the sleepy-cat comparison makes the evening feel relaxed. My partner thought it also made time feel slow; we noticed different parts of the same comparison.
Adult check: Adult checks actual discussion. Require own response, accurately recorded other response and comparison supported by the simile.
Task 8
Example or expected evidence: Finding the sketchbook resolves the search. I find the laugh a cheerful finish. Replacing laughed with sighed with relief would make the ending focus more on his worry ending.
Adult check: Require a supported opinion, accurate resolution, a sensible proposed change and explained effect. Accept critical views if connected to the supplied ending.