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In a familiar class story, Tama plants a seed, waters it each day and sees a yellow flower open.
Use the pictures as memory clues. Say a complete event for each picture rather than naming single objects.
AC9EFLE05 โข Foundation English
I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.
I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.
Learning goal: I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.
In a familiar class story, Tama plants a seed, waters it each day and sees a yellow flower open.
Use the pictures as memory clues. Say a complete event for each picture rather than naming single objects.
Keep Tama, the planting and the daily care. Change the final plant from a yellow flower to a tall bean vine.
Tell listeners what stayed the same and what changed. The change can be shown through play, performance, images or writing.
In a familiar class story, Tama plants a seed, waters it each day and sees a yellow flower open.
Use the pictures as memory clues. Say a complete event for each picture rather than naming single objects.
Keep Tama, the planting and the daily care. Change the final plant from a yellow flower to a tall bean vine.
Tell listeners what stayed the same and what changed. The change can be shown through play, performance, images or writing.
Drawing and role-play can represent characters and main events from a familiar literary text.
Think: Choose one main event. Draw it or make a freeze-frame pose. Say who is present and what is happening.
Try: Which story event are you showing, and what clue will help the audience recognise it?
A strong answer: Complete the modelled response and show this evidence in your own example: represents a recognisable character and event and explains where it belongs in the story.
Check: The learner represents a recognisable character and event and explains where it belongs in the story.
If you are stuck: Place the original event image beside the child's drawing or pose and match one feature at a time.
Ordered pictures can hold the main event sequence and support an oral, written or digitally recorded retell.
Think: Select the main-event images. Arrange them from beginning to ending. Retell each image in order and check the sequence.
Try: What happened before this picture, and what must happen after it?
A strong answer: Complete the modelled response and show this evidence in your own example: orders the pictures from story evidence and gives a connected retell.
Check: The learner orders the pictures from story evidence and gives a connected retell.
If you are stuck: Begin with the first and final event fixed, then decide where the remaining picture belongs.
Tell the familiar text in three parts: first, next and finally.
A clear adaptation starts with an accurate retell. Keep the main events in order so listeners recognise the original.
Change the character, setting, object or ending, then say what stayed the same.
The adaptation should keep enough anchors from the familiar text. Changing everything makes it a new story rather than an adapted version.
Show one event as a freeze-frame, puppet scene or role-play. Ask a partner which event it shows.
This lets learners demonstrate sequence through action. A partner's answer checks whether the event is clear.
After the adaptation, complete: In both versions ____. In my new version ____.
The comparison makes the creative change purposeful and visible. Accept oral, image or writing responses.
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Before you watch:
Planet Nutshell โ Using imagination to tell and change a story.
As you watch: What could you change to make the story your own?
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Try it: Use toys to retell a familiar story. Change one character or place and explain your new version.
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