AC9EFLE05 โ€ข Foundation English

retell and adapt familiar literary texts

I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.

Key vocabulary
  • retell โ€” tell a text again using its important events
  • sequence โ€” the order in which events happen
  • adapt โ€” change part of a familiar text to make a new version
  • character โ€” a person, animal or imagined being in a literary text
  • event โ€” something that happens in a text
  • beginning โ€” the first part of a text or retell
  • ending โ€” the final part that finishes a text or retell
  • performance โ€” showing a text to others through voice, movement or acting
Key concept

I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.

Learning goal: I can retell a familiar story in order and change part of it in a new version.

I am ready when I can

  • I can choose the main events rather than every small detail.
  • I can sequence story pictures by what happens first, next and finally.
  • I can retell the familiar text so a listener can follow it.
  • I can adapt one character, setting, event or ending through play, images or words.
  • I can explain what stayed the same and what changed.
See it, then try it

See the skill in action

In a familiar class story, Tama plants a seed, waters it each day and sees a yellow flower open.

Use the pictures as memory clues. Say a complete event for each picture rather than naming single objects.

Worked example 2: adapt one part of the known story

Keep Tama, the planting and the daily care. Change the final plant from a yellow flower to a tall bean vine.

Tell listeners what stayed the same and what changed. The change can be shown through play, performance, images or writing.

See the skill in action

In a familiar class story, Tama plants a seed, waters it each day and sees a yellow flower open.

Use the pictures as memory clues. Say a complete event for each picture rather than naming single objects.

Worked example 2: adapt one part of the known story

Keep Tama, the planting and the daily care. Change the final plant from a yellow flower to a tall bean vine.

Tell listeners what stayed the same and what changed. The change can be shown through play, performance, images or writing.

Australian Curriculum elaborations

E1: Retell through drawing and role-play

Drawing and role-play can represent characters and main events from a familiar literary text.

Think: Choose one main event. Draw it or make a freeze-frame pose. Say who is present and what is happening.

Try: Which story event are you showing, and what clue will help the audience recognise it?

A strong answer: Complete the modelled response and show this evidence in your own example: represents a recognisable character and event and explains where it belongs in the story.

Check: The learner represents a recognisable character and event and explains where it belongs in the story.

If you are stuck: Place the original event image beside the child's drawing or pose and match one feature at a time.

E2: Sequence pictures to retell a story

Ordered pictures can hold the main event sequence and support an oral, written or digitally recorded retell.

Think: Select the main-event images. Arrange them from beginning to ending. Retell each image in order and check the sequence.

Try: What happened before this picture, and what must happen after it?

A strong answer: Complete the modelled response and show this evidence in your own example: orders the pictures from story evidence and gives a connected retell.

Check: The learner orders the pictures from story evidence and gives a connected retell.

If you are stuck: Begin with the first and final event fixed, then decide where the remaining picture belongs.

Common misconceptions
  • A retell includes every tiny detail โ€” Limit the picture path to the main events needed for the story to make sense.
  • An adaptation can become an unrelated new story โ€” Keep two or more anchor features visible and change only one clear part first.
  • Pictures are sequenced by colour or appearance instead of events โ€” Ask what happened first, next and finally, then use story cause and time clues to reorder the images.
Explain and apply

Retell before adapting

Tell the familiar text in three parts: first, next and finally.

Answer and teaching guidance

A clear adaptation starts with an accurate retell. Keep the main events in order so listeners recognise the original.

Change one clear part

Change the character, setting, object or ending, then say what stayed the same.

Answer and teaching guidance

The adaptation should keep enough anchors from the familiar text. Changing everything makes it a new story rather than an adapted version.

Use play or performance

Show one event as a freeze-frame, puppet scene or role-play. Ask a partner which event it shows.

Answer and teaching guidance

This lets learners demonstrate sequence through action. A partner's answer checks whether the event is clear.

Compare both versions

After the adaptation, complete: In both versions ____. In my new version ____.

Answer and teaching guidance

The comparison makes the creative change purposeful and visible. Accept oral, image or writing responses.

Try these
  1. Picture-path retell โ€” Children place three main-event pictures from left to right, then retell using first, next and finally.
    Three numbered event frames connected by arrows
  2. Freeze-frame performance โ€” Small groups make a still pose for one main event. The audience identifies where the event belongs in the sequence.
    Beginning, middle and ending floor markers
  3. Change one card โ€” Replace one character, setting or ending card. Children retell the adapted version and name exactly what changed.
    Original event strip with one contrasting change card
Check your understanding

Quick checks

  • To retell a story, what should you do first?
  • Which picture order makes sense for a retell?
  • Which choice is an adaptation?
  • A child acts out a familiar character and the main events. What are they doing?

Mastery evidence

  • To retell a story, what should you do first?
  • Which picture order makes sense for a retell?
  • Which choice is an adaptation?
  • A child acts out a familiar character and the main events. What are they doing?
  • The learner represents a recognisable character and event and explains where it belongs in the story.
  • The learner orders the pictures from story evidence and gives a connected retell.
Resources
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Recommended: Let's Tell a Story

Planet Nutshell โ€” Using imagination to tell and change a story.

As you watch: What could you change to make the story your own?

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